Dr. Jamie Bondage

Thanks! I love the storybook you put me in! But I have a question. Can we make more characters? Or do we just have one?

Ryan: I chuckled as she squirmed. she loved it. I grinned. This was fun. a lot of fun. I nipped at the sensitive folds of skin, hoping to make her ...

Ryan: I smiled and pulled her back into the room. I pushed her down on the bed, licking and sucking between her legs again. I loved making her squirm. it ...

I actually really liked it. A few comma errors, mispelled words, and one sentence where it didn't sound right. It was a bit clich

Ryan: I moaned under her. "I love you, with all my heart." I smiled as she kissed. "Want to go somewhere more comfortable?" I asked, wrigling underneath her.

This is extremely short and repetitive. You need to lenghthen it and add more substance. Every song has a reason why it was written, normally to express emotion. Get more ...

I liked it, but it didn't seem like a song to me. But I loved the meaning behind the words. I loved this. it was really good. Write more! XD ...

Ryan: I moaned into her. I bit her and sucked and licked, getting every drop of liquid she gave me. I held her stomach still as I was below her, ...

Ryan: I couldn't stand it anymore. I picked Carolina up and put her on the toilet, with the seat down. I spread her legs apart and starting licking and sucking, ...

Ryan: I kneaded my hands into her front passionately, opening my mouth for her tongue to enter as I moaned and squirmed under her from the pleasure of it all. ...

Ryan: I moaned, loving the feel of her body against mine. "A-as you wi-wish, master." I moaned. I couldn't help it. I loved the feel of her. I whimpered under ...

Welcome! I hope you like it here! It's wonderful that you joined. I thought I should say hi. XD Lol. If you have any questions, or if you need critiques, ...

Ryan: I moaned and whimpered, stopping what I was doing. I sat there helpless. "What do you want me to do now, master?" I asked whimpering. It was so hard ...

Ryan: I smiled. "As you wish master." I worked my hands around her front passionately, massaging them, kneading them with my hands, hoping to please. I moaned softly, then blushed. ...

Ryan: My eyes shinned. "As you wish, master." I reached up and undid her top, moving my hands down to her breasts as I worked her bikini top down. When ...